Muenco Lou's Skills/Magic

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Name: Energy Barrier
Cost of the Spell: Energy of the user.
What It Does: Lou creates a square barrier which is hard to break.
Negative Effects it has on the User: He is not watching his back.
Damage It Deals: None, it's for Protection
History of the Spell/Skill:
The first time Lou did this was when he walked in London, and the sky was black with blinking stars, and the street ahead of him was filled with blood and glowing red eyes in the dark. Muenco was an Spellcaster and could use his energy and control it. Another Spellcaster approached Lou and Lou turned around and saw who it was. There was one of his friends and he asked to have a sparring in front of the glowing red eyes. The friend didn't want to, but instead showed a technique which could be performed by any Spellcaster. He showed how to do the Energy Barrier, and after two times of trying he managed to do it, and a new spell for Lou was created.

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Name: Sending Barrier
Cost of the Spell: Energy of the user.
What It Does: Lou send the energy barrier and hits the enemy.
Negative Effects it has on the User: Must have created Energy Barrier.
History of the Spell/Skill:
After Lou had learned the Energy Barrier technique, his friend leaved the place, and returned to whatever the place he came from. Righ after he leaved, one of the red glowing eyes creature jumped out to fight Lou. A great way to try out his new technique was what Lou was thinking. The red eyed creature was a werewolf, his fur was brown, and he didn't look strong. Lou didn't have any weapons to defeat a werewolf, since Lou was for the mostly, killing vampires and Immortals. The werewolf jumped towards him and Lou created the Barrier which the werewolf crashed into, making Lou almost falling backwards, and when he stood up, he fell down forward instead. The Barrier was sent flying trough the air and hit the werewolf. The werewolf was sent backwards by the hit and was knocked unconsiuss by a rock he landed on. "Hmm, unconsiuss, i don't wanna be a loser and kill him while he is not able to do anything. Well, bye bye wolf!"

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Name: Muenco Lou's Crazy Form
What It Does: The Full power of Muenco Lou is shown.
Negative Effects it has on the User: He can't controll himself, and goes on a rampage.
Damage It Deals: It's more like an Transformation, then a Skill.
How to do it: When their in real danger, the Transformation works by it self.

History of the Spell/Skill:
Lou was walking down the empty street in the early morning and noticed something wierd; The "Muenco" side of him wasn't talking at all. But anyway, the sun was about to rise, and the corpse of a dead man was right above me. "Who the hell did this to you?" Lou asked the dead man that couldn't answer. Lou saw the blood, and the blood was fresh, the creature that killed of this person, was definetely not far from here. At the road ahead of him, small dots with blood was the map Lou had decided to follow. The blood went down some streets, and into a dark corner. This was only a trap, the bastard who did this knew he was coming. Out from behind, the bastard jumped on the back of Lou, grabbed the arms of him so he couldn't move. Lou couldn't see good, but got a glimpt of the guy, it was for sure a Vampire that was targeting him. Lou had to kill him, before he bites.

Lou jumped backwards and crashes into the wall with the Vampire in the middle. The Vampire fell down in the water on the ground, while Lou draw his Kuro scimitar. "Looks like i'm taking your head..." Lou said while smiling towards the vampire. "You shouldn't go easy on me, I'm actually a good fighter!" the Vampire answered with a dirty and wet face. The vampire draw a two swords and told Lou; "I'm using Nitoryu!". The vampire ran towards Lou, took the swords in a cross, jumped up in the air and yelled; "Wind Cutter!". The vampire took a cut in the air and the pressure attacked Lou, but Lou didn't feel so much damage from it. Lou was just about to run towards the vampire, but his legs wasn't listening, and he just fell over. "What the hell?" Lou whispered to himself. The "Muenco" side of him wake up and was also like Lou, he just said; "What the hell? I can't move my legs."

"I don't know what happened... He sent some wind pressure at me and that's it!" "Lou" told "Muenco". Muenco was getting angry, while Lou was scared, and then the vampire ran towards them again with the swords in a cross. Muenco was getting more angry, and Lou was about to pass out, and they managed to get on their legs again. "W-what?" the vampired said confused and alittle scared at the same time. While Muenco Lou went back on his legs, he instead, went down on all his four like a dog. His eyes went all white and the skin became grey. The monster Muenco Lou had become looked up on the vampire, and jumped up towards him. They both came towards eachother, but Lou was in a greater speed. Lou charged his hand, and puched into the stomach of the vampire. The vampire was thrown fifty meters away with a big wound on his stomach. Lou landed on two legs and stood there for some seconds before passing out. He wakes up some hours after, finding him sleeping in the middle of the streets.

Can someone approve/deny this?

oh right. sry last i had checked it was unfinished.
but approved

Two more magic skills added

Hmm... Okay. I have a little problem with the trap technique, but the barrier (protection) is fine. I jsut don't think you should be able to make anyone stop in their tracks at any point in time..

Ok, i changed it to a attack instead, but what should i write in the "Damage dealt"

To be honest with you, i really don't care.

I took it away, and it damage people, thats the most important...
Approved?

MP usage: 10 for the barriers and 20 for crazy form